IS THIS a GOOD POEM??
Question by 1coolgirl: IS THIS A GOOD POEM??
Regret is reflected from your eyes. You try to apologize. But, what can be done now. You just tilt your head down and say wow. “I’m not hurting anyone” is what you used to say. But know others have to pay. Joints smoked, crack snort, you think it’s okay. You wanted it all your way. Thought you were tough, unstoppable, but know you lay like a squashed up bug. Unable to move or tug. Cocaine once left out. Little brother tries it without any doubt. He was seven and now he’s breathless; all because of a foolish act. An act, you thought you weren’t going to hurt anyone with, and that sure wasn’t a fact. “how stupid of me to leave it out” is what you cry. Now you realize? Now do you take pride? Nothing can be done. Now it’s over, did you have fun? Watching people’s trust disappear. Now your here. Wondering what else to fear.
Oh and yes I did write it my own word(: (I’m 16)
Ohh I did it as you may see ever 2 sentences rhyme and the poem is separated like that, I just wrote it as one long poem because I typed it in my iPod (: this poem was just a school assignment (:
Best answer:
Answer by MY WAFFLE!! #<(o_o<)
Awww! that was awesome. Were you writing it about someone? either way that was amazing very good for someone who is sixteen and people able to get the emotions across in there poem. I liked it 🙂
Answer by troubled flower
I really like it, it’s a really good piece. I would just suggest to not write it as a paragraph form. =)
-hope it helped!
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